David Okafor

In the Room With David

• Reads every draft the way an admissions officer does: fast, tired, and looking for a reason to care.
• Maps each supplemental to what that specific college actually rewards.
• Kills clichés on sight — perseverance, passion, and "rapidly changing world" don’t survive round one.
• Keeps the student’s voice intact. If it doesn’t sound like a teenager wrote it, it’s wrong.

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