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COMMON APP — aka the "Personal Essay"

The online application site that allows students to apply to over 1,100 colleges and universities with one central application. Students choose from 7 essay prompts, with topics pertaining to identity/background, personal growth/challenges, gratitude, intellectual curiosity, or a choose-your-own topic. 650 words maximum. Best for narratives. It may or may not be required — each college decides. Showcases their values, thoughts, personal qualities, life lessons, and contributions to the college community.

UC PERSONAL INSIGHT QUESTIONS (PIQs)

Essay questions for applicants to the University of California. Answer 4 of 8 questions — student's choice. 350 words maximum per response. Choose the questions that BEST allow them to showcase their personality and experience. The prompts cover: leadership, creativity, greatest talent/skill, educational opportunity/barrier, significant challenges, academic subject, community/school improvement, and strong candidate. Aim is for 4 complementary narratives that paint a portrait of the student — each shows a different dimension of the same student.

SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAYS

Additional essays that matter enormously. These are college-specific and beyond the main personal statement. Why do you want to attend this university? What major you chose and why? Describe a community you belong to. How would you contribute to their campus? Aim for a tone of curiosity, expressing deeper interest and future direction.

COALITION ESSAYS

Personal essays submitted through the Coalition Application, another U.S. college application platform. Not part of SCOIR. These personal essays are STUDENT-DRIVEN. They allow students to tell the admissions committee something meaningful about themselves that cannot be seen in their transcripts or activities list. Emphasizes personal storytelling and student choice. Usually asks about the student's self and influential experiences.

SCHOLARSHIP ESSAYS

A personal essay you submit along with your scholarship application. It conveys who you are behind the grades/resume, what you've accomplished, your interests, your life goals, and why you deserve the scholarship award.

TRANSFER ESSAYS

A personal essay you submit for community college or when transferring from one college to another.

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